TWO WRITING TEACHERS

TWO WRITING TEACHERS

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Content Area Literacy Task Force January Newsletter

Skills focus: Evidence and Support

A Principal’s Perspective

Alicia Hunter, Principal

Farristown Middle School

Teaching students to provide evidence may be one of the most "real world" ways we can prepare them. It should flow logically from the work we do ourselves: as educators we constantly seek and provide support and evidence for our decisions. We use data to make assessment decisions, we take anecdotal notes to provide evidence for a placement, we rely on examples of best practice and student behavior for our instructional focus. As an administrator I observe, formally and during "walkthroughs," to gather evidence for conversations I regularly have with teachers.
In our team meetings, we talk about students. We think of them individually, as learners, and collectively, as data. Sharing a school-wide goal of influencing and noting student growth (a clear and productive cycle as it occurs through intentional formative assessment), teachers share specific strategies used during the week. These conversations supplement information I gather as I spend time in classrooms, watching students and teachers at work. As teachers talk about what’s going on in their rooms, the question we routinely return to is "How do you know the strategy is working?" In answering, teachers provide evidence. They talk in specific terms about what they do; they explain why they do it; they collaborate to analyze why it works. They tell each other what they’ve done so that others may try the same thing, recycled to fit their classroom and teaching style, and so that they have a sounding board for when things don’t work exactly as planned.
And it’s the same kind of thinking, really, that lets them model real world experiences for students. Language Arts teachers don’t rely on just one set of data. MAP scores alone, for example, don’t tell them nearly everything they need to know about students’ abilities and progress. Thus, they apply the same kind of thinking to their instruction: their students read multiple texts, often on multiple levels and in multiple genres, about the same topic. Students are encouraged to find conflicting evidence within the texts, and must go to a third or fourth source to resolve questions they bring to their reading. This creates a natural inquiry process: students develop their own reasons to read, they accumulate details that let them develop a full impression of initial questions, and in reporting answers they identify new questions and find new reasons to investigate related issues. This is authentic, student-driven, research. And it becomes a practice students can use beyond the classroom; they understand the relationship between informing themselves and making decisions, and they understand the process of asking complex questions and synthesizing answer possibilities.
Similarly, math teachers have recently talked about helping students develop their ability to provide evidence by allowing students to explore multiple ways to solve problems. For example, while students in one class were working collaboratively to solve problems, I overheard a teacher conferencing with one student about a recent assignment. She asked, "How do you think you could have solved the problem in a different way?" The teacher followed the student’s response with another question: "How would it change your answer if you made that decision?" Excellent questions for all students (Continued on pg. 6)

Coming Next Month: Mentor Texts

In This Issue: Recommended Reading pgs. 4, 7 Classroom Strategies pgs. 2-6
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Proving With Evidence

Global Warming "For or Against" Evidence T-Chart

Lisa Antoniou, Science

Antoniou – EKU Writing Project, 2012 FOR GLOBAL WARMING AGAINST GLOBAL WARMING A. Source B. What did they say? (evidence) A. Source B. What did they say? (evidence) A. Source B. What did they say? (evidence) A. Source B. What did they say? (evidence)

For More Information and Resources

Visit us and follow this link: www.ekuwritingproject.org

See the Content Area Literacy page for resources, or

check out the application to become a part of EKUWP!

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Empower Learning for Life

"Where’s the evidence, Sherlock?"

"It’s elementary, my dear Watson, it’s in the text!"

Jennifer Bernhard, Literacy Specialist

As much as we would prefer to think that we teach students to support their ideas with evidence from a text in order to hone their critical thinking skills, if we are honest we know that what we are really doing is preparing them to write for a test. However, take heart, this can indeed be an honorable task.
When we teach students how to dissect a passage-based prompt and prepare to write, we should convey the very important message that testing is a genre of its own and that it is very nice people who create assessments knowing that they, the students, are the audience, so we can set the stage for a more positive experience.
If we also tell them that it is not the intention of those assessment people to trick them or trip them up and they are very likely to come away from the test having learned some astounding facts, we are a big step closer to preparing them for success.
Also, it doesn’t hurt to assure them that when, like Watson, they ask, "Where’s the evidence?" that like Sherlock, they will hear the response, "It’s elementary my dear Watson, think and search so you will find it in the text."

For a sample of passage-based prompts across contents with annotated written responses citing textual evidence,

FOLLOW THIS LINK!

Like this strategy? Want more info?

See Jennifer present with other members of the CALTF at the KCTE conference Saturday, February 23 in Covington

Evidence and Support for Elementary Math

Amanda Terry, Mathematics

In my classroom having evidence to support your answer is important, however it is going to look different than many other content areas. In math much of the evidence and support comes from the background knowledge or the process for completion. For my students there are a few questions I use to guide their thinking and lead to the support need for their problem. The questions I use are the following:

How do you know?

What steps did you take to get there?

If you were reading this, would you know what the problem is and how to do it?

In my classroom I most often do this through conferencing with my students. While working with a student one on one the rest of the students are working in partners using the questions as a guide. The expectation is that their explanations are written clearly enough so that anyone could pick it up and complete the problem. Page 4

Recommendations

From the Library

Media Specialist

Katie McClain

-Reading History: a Practical Guide to Improving Literacy by Janet Allen-
Tools for Teaching Content Literacy by Janet Allen-
Classrooms that Work: They Can All Read and Write by Patricia Cunningham-
Writing in Science: How to Scaffold to Support Learning by Betsy Fulwiler-
Revisit, Reflect, Retell: Time-tested Strategies for Teaching Reading Comprehension by Linda Hoyt-
QAR now: Question Answer Relationships by Terry Raphael-
They Say, I Say: The Moves that Matter in Academic Writing by Gerald Graff and Cathy Birkenstein-
Texts and Lessons for Conent-Area Reading by Harvey Daniels and Nancy Steineke-
Teaching Argument Writing: Supporting Claims with Relevant Evidence and Clear Reasoning by George Hillocks, Jr.-Everything’s an Argument by Andrea A. Lunsford and John J. Ruszkiewicz

Safe Evidence in Social Studies

Maggie Brewer, Social Studies

When helping students to write in Social Studies, I am always asking them to determine what makes good evidence. Is it simply their opinion? The opinion of an adult? Information from a textbook? Something from the internet? What makes a credible source?
In their book, Oh Yeah?!: Putting Argument to Work Both in School and Out, Michael Smith, Jeffrey Wilhelm, and James Fredricksen describe data as something that needs a "safe starting point." That is, whether the reader would accept the data and continue reading or whether "they’d challenge the data and require" the writer to explain or establish it further.The process they describe to rate the safety of the data includes creating a "semantic differential scale" where one end of the scale is labeled "completely unsafe" and the other end of the scale is labeled "completely safe." Given a piece of data, students would mark where on the scale they think the data should fall. The book explains that it is not so much placing the data on the scale that is important, rather the discussion of the thought process that leads to their decisions.
A sample lesson includes possible claims which have four pieces of data that students might use as support. Students rank each on the scale and discuss their rankings. A follow-up activity is also suggested.
Pass out an article from a newspaper, magazine, or internet source and have students identify evidence used by the author. Ask half of the class to look for the best piece of evidence in favor of the topic and the other half to look for the best piece of evidence against the topic. Next, students would move into groups to formulate and explain their answers. Their explanation would include the criteria regarding how they chose the "best" evidence; how carefully designed a study, how expert a witness, how detailed a story. When writing in the future, students will be better prepared to determine what makes safe and strong evidence for their own claims.

MARK YOUR CALENDAR:

June 8, 2013

EKUWP Summer Conference:

Critical Conversations

Keynote Speaker

James Frederickson

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Question/Answer Relationships (QAR)

Rhonda Orttenburger, Social Studies

Teaching students how to think and read critically is very important because it can begin to help students decide what information is relevant when communicating their thoughts and ideas. To prepare my students for discussions and assessments, I use a strategy that helps my students think critically and read critically. This strategy is Question/Answer Relationships (QAR), which was developed by Taffy Raphael.
The four types of QAR can be divided into two groups – in the text or in my head. Answers to the first two types of questions – right there and think, search, and find – are found in the text.Answers to the other two types of questions –
author and me and on my own are in a student’s head. When teaching this strategy, I also teach students how to refer to or cite evidence from the text to support their comprehension. When teaching my fourth graders how to support their comprehension with evidence from the text/passage, I begin by briefly explaining the four types of question/answer relationships (QAR) and provide anchor charts as a resource.
Then we use Jeff Wilhelm’s 3-step model of
show me, help me, let me. I model (show me) the question/answer relationships one by one and help students gain an understanding of this QAR through oral discussions and guided practice (help me). Before I begin teaching another QAR, students are given an assessment using the particular question to prove they are able to show they learned how to categorize the QAR to be able to answer the question (let me). Initially, students learn about a
right there question, which is the easiest question to answer because you can find the answer to the question right there in the text in one place, which means evidence to support their answers are "right there." Although they are not required to cite evidence from the text to support comprehension when answering a multiple choice question, having a student underline the answer in the text/passage shows him/her the importance of locating information (answers) in the text. This begins to prepare them for citing constructed short answer and extended response questions.Most
right there questions are found in the multiple choice section of an assessment. For example, the question might ask a student what is the name of Jeff’s best friend. Teaching a student to go back to the text and scan or skim it for the key words "best friend" will help them see that the answer is located right there in the text. Next, we tackle
think, search, and find questions. The answer is still right in the text, but not in one place. To find the answer, you must put information (evidence) together from more than one part of the text. Putting it together into an answer is often difficult for students so having them "mark" the places they find answers in the text is important. Marking where they find answers in the text when answering a t
hink, search, and find question is important because students have to read critically so they can assemble the parts to write their answer. It is important at this time in instruction for the elementary teacher to begin teaching them how to refer to information in the text, whether they are paraphrasing or using direct quotes. To show their readers they are using information from the text to answer the question, I teach them how to use phrases, such as according to the text, in the passage, or the text states in their answers. Of course, students must also be taught the correct way to cite a direct quote.The third type of question is
author and me questions. The answer to this type of question is not explicitly stated in the text, but students need information that the author has given them. They then combine that information with what they already know so they can answer the question. To answer this type of question, students must actively recognize and analyze evidence from the text as well as use their background knowledge to construct their answers. They must think about what they know and what the author says to answer the question. For example, students may be asked to give an opinion and back it up with information from the text. Again, marking information the author gives them is important. Referring to the author by name or by saying a phrase, such as
the author states also is important so the reader knows students are using information from the text. (Continued on pg. 6)
(Continued from pg. 1) to consider, as it not only teaches them math skills but also the problem-solving or decision-making skills that will transfer to other situations in their lives. This type of feedback is integral for student growth because it’s real, as opposed to the canned, assignment-driven assessment that could otherwise be given. And by being pushed to answer in real ways, students are given the chance to think in multiple dimensions. They develop on their own a range of strategies to apply as the situation dictates, and they develop the authority to make decisions about when a particular strategy might be the right choice. I was most pleased at the end of that conference: the teacher was intentional and pushed the student to think critically. And this is the kind of thing she’ll bring to the next team meeting, because she’s figured something out, something that needs to be shared. Because demonstrable evidence of a student’s growth contributes to a teacher’s growth, and one teacher’s success spreads when she has the chance to lead others to look for answers to questions about teaching we all share.(Continued from pg. 5) The fourth question/answer relationship is on my own. This type of question is not text-based and is not found on assessments, but is often used to help students connect their life experiences and background knowledge to the text before reading.In conclusion, students need to understand question/answer relationships, use critical reading and thinking skills, and refer to or cite information from the passage to answer questions. With this understanding, students will be able to apply their learning and show their readers what they know. Knowing how to answer a constructed response is important in this day and age of testing mania, but finding meaning from texts is the ultimate goal of a reader. Teaching students the importance of finding meaning from text prepares students for the real world.
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Kentucky Writing Project at

Kentucky Council of Teachers of English

This year members of the Kentucky Writing Project will be presenting a special strand at KCTE. The focus for Saturday, February 23 will be "A Day on the Common Core." We hope that if you are able to attend KCTE in Covington this year you will visit the Kentucky Writing Project.
The morning will begin at 8:30 with a session offered by CALTF member and Clark County District Literacy Specialist Jennifer Bernhard. In her presentation, "Where’s the evidence, Sherlock?" Jennifer will help participants teach their students to analyze text in order to locate evidence to respond to a passage-based prompt. The next session is led by Sabrina Back, a social studies and English/Language Arts teacher who also directs the Mountain Writing Project. Her session, entitled,
"How Do We Get There From Here?" will help participants work with complex texts and ideas in argumentative readings. A break for a box lunch will be followed by the option to pick one of the following five two-hour sessions:
Making the Connection – presented by CALTF science teacher Lisa Antoniou and CALTF social studies teacher Maggie Brewer. Participants will leave with a toolbox full of literacy strategies they can use to meet the Common Core Standards in content area classes. Text Complexity – University of Louisville Writing Project Teacher Consultants Missy Callaway and Suzanne Jackson demonstrate how to teach close-reading and help students navigate complex texts while using a variety of sources about the Vietnam War. Approaching Field Trips in Modes – middle school English teacher Amy Vujaklija takes participants on a virtual field trip to analyze visual text and explore argumentative, narrative, and informative texts. Using Drama to Enhance Listening and Speaking Across the Curriculum – University of Louisville Writing Project Teacher Consultants Dr. Elizabeth Best and Mary Kenzer demonstrate how they use drama to motivate students to listen actively and make connections to reading and writing across all subject areas. Text-Dependent Questions – Eastern Kentucky University Writing Project Director Dr. Sally Martin will guide participants in strategies to create text dependent questions that that will engage students in comprehending complex texts.

For questions regarding KWP at KCTE registration please contact

Linda Satterlee – McFadin at 502-852-4544

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This is a publication of the

Eastern Kentucky University Writing Project

Content Area Literacy Task Force Members:

Sandy Allen, Roundstone Elementary School

Lisa Antoniou, EKUWP Consultant

Jennifer Bernhard, Clark County Schools

Maggie Brewer, Boyle County High School

Alicia Hunter, Farristown Middle School

Mona Eldridge, Northern Middle School

Katie McClain, Farristown Middle School

Tricia McKenny, Bourbon County High School

Rhonda Orttenburger, Kit Carson Elementary School

Brittany Stacy, Southern Middle School

Amanda Terry, Shearer Elementary

For more information, please contact any of these teachers or Maggie Brewer,

margaret.brewer@boyle.kyschools.us

CALTF Recommended Reading:

Texts and Lessons for Content-Area Reading

by Harvey "Smokey" Daniels and

Nancy Steineke

Recommended By: Tricia Mckenny

This text has become one of my go-to resources for reading and writing argument skills. I constantly struggle to find strategies and resources that work, and this book combines both. The entire book is based on using non-fiction texts and articles and condensing them to what Daniels and Steineke call "one-page wonders." These "one-page wonders" are great texts that can immediately be used in a classroom with students. All of the articles are interesting and engaging to students and come from sources like The New York Times, The Washington Post, and The Chicago Tribune. I can’t imagine the time it would take me to track down all of these resources, and thanks to this book I don’t have to.The first half of the book presents 23 "Strategy Lessons" each with its own text provided. The lessons cover everything from annotating and coding texts, to taking notes to organize thinking, to finding support for a position and arguing both sides. Each lesson is presented in a very teacher-friendly format that provides examples, steps in the process, materials needed, and even an estimated time frame ranging from 20 minutes to an entire class period. Once the lesson is completed with the text provided, it is easy to adapt the strategy to cover another text or topic. The lessons have stemmed great conversations and deeper thinking in my students than ever before and the skills they are using have greatly improved their reading and writing.
The second half of the book provides "Text Sets" that can deepen understanding with a focus on reading strategies centered around topics like Invasive Species, PTSD, and global issues that could be used in a variety of content areas. All of the materials and strategies could be used with any text, but the authors save teachers the time of searching to find them.
Texts and Lessons for Content-Area Reading has become a standard fixture on my desk with many pages marked and referenced often. I share the strategies from it with colleagues frequently, and I am glad to have the opportunity to share them with you, our readers

HOT website

http://xnet.rrc.mb.ca/glenh/hots.htm

Want a HOT new website to promote higher order thinking in your classroom? 

Higher order thinking, or “HOT” for short, takes thinking to higher levels than restating the facts. HOT requires that we do something with the facts. We must understand them, infer from them, connect them to other facts and concepts, categorize them, manipulate them, put them together in new or novel ways, and apply them as we seek new solutions to new problems.

This website will provides you with multiple methods of assessments using Bloom's Taxonomy.  It gives you all kinds of approaches to higher order thinking to engage students.  Just click the link, try it out and let me know how you are using it in your classroom.

Summarizing from Choice Literacy

http://www.choiceliteracy.com/articles-detail-view.php?id=737

Summarizing for instruction

Leveled Texts:  Help I Need More Resources!

Everyone seems to be on the lookout for leveled texts these days!  We know at KSE that readers only can improve their reading accuracy, fluency and comprehension if they are reading at their instructional level.  Hopefully, these sites can provide you with more and more resources.

http://teacher.depaul.edu/Nonfiction_Readings.htm Many grade-leveled passages on various content concepts 3rd -6th grade

http://www.k12reader.com/ Use the sidebar to find the grade level you are interested in finding texts for.

http://www.readworks.org/books/passages Non-fiction passages leveled by Lexile

Pathways to the Common Core

 by Lucy Calkins


Interested in a book study?   Pathways to the Common Core is an insightful resource in gaining a better understanding of the ELA standards. 

As we continue to work through the challenges of implementing the Common Core with the support of our new ELA curriculum, this text will provide us with a resource to gain a better understanding throughout the process. This short and easy-to-read text includes the "nuts and bolts" of the reading and writing standards and implications for instruction. 

I'd like to recommend this book as a book study to allow for oportunities to have conversations and discussions that will only support our instructional practices and at the same time helping our students grow as readers and writers.  Let me know your thoughts in the comment section below.  We can conduct book study conversations in person, through this blog or via www.todaysmeet.com.  

ON DEMAND UPDATE:

The response below came from the Cindy Parker from the Division of Program Studies (KDE). In it, she shares her insight into On-Demand writing and reinforces our strong belief in the power of supporting our kids as writers.

Synthesis of a few key points: 
1) Our kids need to WRITE, WRITE, WRITE.  They need multiple opportunities throughout the day to share their thinking in writing- always considering and working to demonstrate these traits:

• audience awareness and purpose
• idea development
• organization of ideas
• word choice
• appropriate conventions including grammar, usage and mechanics

So whether they are sharing information learned through research in a form of some sort, crafting a story, establishing their opinion, responding to learning, reflecting, writing in a family journal, or simply thanking a volunteer or field trip guide....we are pushing them to always work toward communicating with clarity, development, and refinement.
2) Our kids need an understanding of the traits/ characteristics of quality writing. In a nutshell: the focus ought to be on the traits, rather than the form. This is because the traits transcend form. Students gain access to those traits through analyzing model text and/or creating a class rubric that mirrors the state's Scoring Rubric as well as through specific  mini-lessons and experiences writing.  What seems to be most critical is that our kids understand that writers communicate coherently with an audience using the above bullets, regardless of the form (i.e. letter, story, Prezi, essay, feature article, etc.) Are forms obsolete? No, they are a form of organization and still need to be taught and experienced, but they are not the "end all, be all" of writing.
3) Our kids need support, but the goal is always  independence. You know your writers may need graphic organizers to scaffold them as they work to become organized and developed writers, but eventually they need to wean themselves from them as they demonstrate the ability to write without them. You all are always pushing your students to try their own and use what works for them.  Giving student’s a choice to use what is best for them is the key!  It's always a form of support through Gradual Release of Responsibility. 



MS. PARKER'S RESPONSE: The craft of writing is a long, developmental process requiring a variety of strategies and scaffolds at each level. Requiring students to use a certain form (5 paragraphs) can stifle the creativity and growth of the writer. It can also create in the students’ minds a false sense of good writing.

For students to do well in On Demand Writing, it is critical that they first understand the traits of writing as outlined in the Scoring Rubric. According to the K-Prep Assessment Basics, form, although stated in the prompt, is there only to provide context for purpose and audience. Form is not part of the rubric; rather, students will be evaluated on their ability to communicate effectively with an audience by supporting complex ideas in a coherently.

So what does this look like in the classroom? It means that students write, write, and write. They regularly analyze a variety of texts, including their own writing, to understand purpose, audience, idea development, and language. Knowledge of these traits is critical to allow constructive conversations about writing. This can be done in large or small group settings, as mini-lessons in response to formative assessment needs, or as part of a planned instructional sequence. There are numerous resources for teaching the “Traits of Writing” that can be adapted to each grade level.

That doesn’t mean that there isn’t a time or a place for structured organizers as an instructional scaffold. However, because our goal is to develop independent writers, we should gradually release the use of these tools as students evolve in the craft of writing. Remember that on-demand writing is merely an assessment meant to allow students to demonstrate independently the skills they have gained through instruction and that the standards call for students to be able to write well in short and extended timeframes. The standards do not address the strategies for teaching writing, although they do align to a writing process approach.

A resource you might find helpful is Addressing the Three Modes of Writing in the KCAS, available here http://kdeliteracylink.wikispaces.com/file/view/Three+Modes+of+Writing+in+KCAS.pdf/380885860/Three%20Modes%20of%20Writing%20in%20KCAS.pdf. KDE will also be posting soon on the assessment page on-demand writing samplers, annotated student work, and instructional resources.

Hope this helps you—I appreciate your interest in helping students be better writers.


Cindy Parker, NBCT
Literacy Coordinator
Office of Next Generation Learners
Kentucky Department of Education
500 Mero Street, 1911 CPT
Frankfort, KY 40601